July 24, 2011 12:16pm "weakest" --exposure on the hot side, composition is off, you should have cropped the umbrella not her legs or taken a have step back
July 23, 2011 12:05pm per your request re: weakest. pretty model and good elements. I just don't understand why you cropped off the entire bottom of the shot, or perhaps this is the original full frame shot? does not work.sorry.
