November 27, 2012 7:43pm I really really like this one... I like the "coy" pose... her left arm crossing her body shows "some protectiveness". I like the see-thru dress... the panties are distracting. I think you could so the same shot at an angle or differnt pose so no frontal nudity and add some more curosity to the work. I like the lenght and the 2" showing between the top of her hose and the hem of the "Chemise?" The seams in the chemise I thought were distracting at first but then if no panties I thik the curving lines are no longer distracting and accenturate her curvy shape. I think I would like a darker background so the bottom hem where it flares out... some color shows thorgh so it looks transparent there. The top (bra) on her right breast juts out just a bit with space there. I think the fit should be better there. The rest of the dress can hardly contain her explosive womanliness... I think the same should apply to the top area. I love everythign about this girl though. I am wondering if her gaze was downward that would make her look more coy and vulnerable maybe... I think some of your shots are cropped too tight... more headroom above her hear maybe. I would like to see more of her legs too... to the top of her knees (not showing knees) or full lenght with feet too. The cross in her legs is nice... but cut so close it may go unnoticed. Hey... I usually do critques with my two artist daughers and one personal friend and we have ground rules and no one is ever offended but thankful... even the eye of a layperson has some value. Hope I am not offending you and provding you some value. Maybe you can do the same for me? Hit me back?