February 24, 2008 3:33pm The idea is good but the two things that strike me right away are: her arm is just awkward, and the angle of the picture. It looks like it wasn't taken correctly but not on purpose, it just wasn't fixed.
November 30, 2007 12:23am Focus a little less on getting the whole body. Don't get me wrong, this is a good pic. Try to zoom in a little take a little of the background away.
November 29, 2007 6:33pm I think your DOF is off and the focal point on this one shot is her left breast, vice her KILLER eyes...blurring those pools of seduction.
Chaaaaaaaaaaaa!